Book Review: Water

review-cover-waterTitle: Water [Water 1]

Author: Emory Gayle

Genre: Young Adult, Fantasy, Romance

Rating: 3 Stars

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Description/Synopsis:

Cora Reed and Darrien Locke are both haunted by the night Cora’s twin sister drowned. Seven years later, having never actually met, their paths cross, sparking a chain of events that will change both their lives forever.

The last thing that Cora Reed wanted was to fall in love. But this water phobic couldn’t have prepared herself for Darrien Locke, ‘the lord of the abs’ swim instructor at Camp Titus. Unknown to Cora, is the true reason she’s been asked to work there. Mysterious things begin to happen to her, plunging her already torn world into chaos. Only one thing remains steady…Darrien. But he’s not at all what he seems.

Darrien’s sole mission is to return the long lost princess to her father ASAP. Unfortunately, his job has become…complicated. When the mouthy bad tempered princess is nothing like what he was expecting, this work obsessed, emotionally void guard falls hard for the one girl he can never have.

Darrien must help Cora discover who she really is, before a power in the deep rises. But, to do that…Darrien will have to sacrifice his love for Cora and do the unthinkable.

WARNING – SPOILERS MAY ENSUE BEYOND THIS POINT – REVIEW BELOW

Honestly, Water by Emory Gayle was a bit of a mixed bag for me. On the one hand, it was a very interesting story, but on the other, the execution sometimes lacked.

As far as the technical side of things went the book had some pretty obvious flaws. There were a lot of typos. I found problems with tense, spelling, omitted words, and even improper grammar. They were obvious mistakes that could have and should have been cleaned up before publication, and since the author e-mailed me specifically to make sure I had the up-to-date edited copy, I was kind of surprised by how many technical errors I still found.

That aside, there were times that the pace of the book, especially concerning the romance, that seemed rushed, and I think that because of it, there were times when the narrative voice and dialogue of the characters came off as overly dramatic and unrealistic.

that isn’t to say that it was all bad, though. I liked the characters, the world building, the plot…. so many parts of the story. I got sucked into the book and read the entire thing in a matter of a few short hours. I was entertained, and overall, I did like the book. I just think it was in desperate need of another round with the editor.

I think that if you tend to enjoy YA fantasy or romance, you will probably enjoy this book – just be aware that it is lacking a bit in the technical department.

Oh, it’s going to be one of THOSE days…

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I live in a small, rented house that has one of –those- neighbors—you know, the ones who stick their noses it everyone else’s business in lieu of doing what is best for the neighborhood, but still manages to be the biggest jerk regardless of their professed good intentions. Yah. One of those.

Every single day I watch him lead his dog into my yard and tell it to do its business there (despite the fact that he has his own yard right next door). I used to go running out to the front yard to make it clear that I saw his misbehavior every time he did it, but he’d end up yelling at his poor dog, blaming the poor thing for “wandering” instead of his own actions. I don’t bother anymore.

He also has the nasty habit of waiting for bad weather—be it a rainstorm or snow (times when it’s nearly impossible to mow my yard)—to call the city on me for not having my weeds under 6 inches tall when they literally just grew out the night before. He’s done this about four times now. So, this morning, noticing that my weeds were indeed high, I ran out to pull them up out of my yard (at least where he can see them) right under his nose—despite the fact that I have workmen coming to do it for me early next week, and despite the fact that I am severely allergic to them and may very well have an anaphylactic reaction.

So here I am, carrying an armload of tall weeds to my trashcan, trying not to breathe in the pollen at 7 a.m., when I step into my backyard and spot a steaming puddle of water right off the corner of my house. I stare at it for a moment—after all, it’d rained the night before, of course there would be puddles—but this was the only puddle. I looked up to see if the roof was dripping. Nope. Was the foundation wet, signaling a leak in the nearby bathroom—as had happened earlier in the year? Nope. There was, however, a puffy ball of muddy bubbles (mid-picture above), and a definite sign of the water having a flow to it. I hunched down, taking off my weed-stained gloves, and touched the puddle…. well aware that I could very well be putting my hand into some random animal’s steaming hot urine at this point. The water was indeed hot. I turned my head towards the nearby shed. My water heater was bubbling away—I could hear it. Crap.

As you may have guessed at this point, I have a leak in my yard. Somewhere between my water heater (which sits in an outdoor shed/laundry room) and the half-bath that sits at the corner of my house, an underground pipe has begun to bubble up it’s discontent. So now, rather than catching up on my reading or working on Khet for the day, I’ve got to sit around with my water turned off, waiting for my landlord to send workmen to come dig up my yard and fix it. I had plans to do laundry this morning, cook this afternoon, and at some point, use the toilet today. Le sigh. I have now abandoned those dreams. Instead, I will sit by the phone and wait for someone to show up, praying my yard doesn’t turn into a giant muddy sinkhole in the meantime.

I hope every single one of you readers is having a much better, more productive morning.